Forum:New to Yugioh - Deck Building.

I have many questions but this is the newest edit. I recently posted the bottom to yahoo answers and people told me that it was a beat down deck and that it wasn't very good. Then one guy referred me to here. Here it goes,

I just recently started playing because my friend asked me to start. So I bought a deck and then bought a couple of boosters and stuff. Then I went and bought a couple of cards that looked cool and that I thought worked well with each other. I'm still new so idk how to build my deck. So far I looked online and it says try to have a ratio from 40 cards: 5 monsters and 3 spell cards and 2 trap cards. So my deck has 20 monsters, 11 Spells, and 9 traps.

These are my cards

Monsters:

Tributes: 7 2x Felgrand Dragon 2x Tyrant Dragon 1x Horus the Black Flame Dragon lv6 1x Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon 1x The Creator

Non Tributes: 13 3x Luster Dragon 2x Masked Dragon 2x Lord of D. 1x Twin Headed Behemoth 1x Kaiser Seahorse 1x Decoy Dragon 1x Herald of Creation 1x Morphing Jar 1x Spear Cretin

Spells: 11 1x Lightning Vortex 2x Soul Exchange 1x Graceful Charity 1x Mausoleum of the Emperor 2x Flute of Summoning Dragon 1x Premature Burial 1x Giant Trunade 1x Foolish Burial 1x Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps: 9 1x Sakuretsu Armor 1x Mirror Force 1x Magic Jammer 1x Mirror Force 1x Draining Shield 1x Jar of Greed 1x Magic Cylinder 1x Call of the Haunted 1x Dust Tornado

I was thinking of buying "Horus the Black Flame Dragon lv8" and another "Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon" but I don't know what the ratio of tributes to non-tributes are. I have 13 non tributes and 11 tributes.

What do you guys think? Of the Deck? Of the Ratio? Suggestion for Tribute-NonTribute Ratio? Suggestions period? 1 hour ago - 4 days left to answer.