Forum:Somebody rate my deck

Hi everyone .. this is my first ever NOT MIX deck ( mean i dun put mushmellow, DD warrior if i making a dark deck / i din put breaker for a Light deck )

monster X 20 zombie master zombie carrier BF blizzard BF moon BF sura BF gale BF bora Dark grefer dark creator ...

spell X 13 BOOK OF LIFE MONSter reborn HEavy Storm Card safety Return Zombie World ...

trap X 9 bottemless CcV MIrror Force heaven Horn solemn judment ...

plz give some comment and rate my deck who wanna duel with me ( add me msn : garnetlenne@hotmail.com )