Forum:Rate my yu gi oh decks please

Can somebody rate my decks? the first is gonna go to a tournament the other one is just fun

16 monsters

Morphing jar 2 x3

Needle worm x3

warm worm x1

swift scarecrow x2

des lacooda x2

brow huntsman of dark world x1

Sangan x1

marshmallon x1

morping jar x1

night assailant x1

13 traps

raigeki break x1

macro cosmos x3

gravity bind x1

dark bribe x2

needle ceiling x1

divine wrath x1

waboku x3

solemn judgement x1

19 spells

lighting vortex x1

mystical space typhoon x1

card destruction x1

nightmare steelcage x3

book of eclipse x3

book of moon x1

book of thaiyou x1

gravekeepers servant x3

level limit area b x1

swords of revealing light x1

gold sarcophagus x1

soul absorption x1

my side deck holds

messenger of peace x3

Asault on ghq x1

spell of pain x2

tuners scheme x1

book of thaiyou x2

monster reincarnation x1

mirror force x1

soul release x2

can somebody take a look at this deck?

thank you!

The other deck is gonna be my new best deck but it needs more ajustments

its a macro burn deck

13 traps marco cosmos x3

magic cylinder x2

d.d. dynamite x3

gravity bind x1

mirror force x1

return from the different demension x1

torrentinal tribute x1

dark bribe x1

21 spells

inferno tempest x3

gravekeepers servant x2

hand destruction x3

magical mallet x1

mystical space typhoon x1

soul absorption x2

gaint trunade x1

swords of revealing light x1

book of moon x1

grand convergance x2

gold sarcophagus x2

dimensional fissure x2

13 monsters

d.d. scout plane x3

grinder golem x3

cyber valley x1

necroface x1

d.d. survivor x2

morphing jar 2 x1

gren maju da eiza x3

two decks please rate them

greetings rolf