Forum:Help with First Blackwing Deck

<!-- Please put your content under this line. Be sure to sign your edits with four tildes: ~ -- This is my first blackwing deck I'm thinking about making. I am new to Yu-gi-oh! and this would be my first deck period. I do big brothers big sisters and my lil brother is obsessed with yu-gi-oh! so I wanted to impress him and his friends while having some fun with them. I could add DAD or mirror force, but let me know what you think about this without them.

Monsters-18 x3 Kalut X3 Sirocco x3 Shura x3 Bora x2 Blizzard x1 Gale x2 Battlestorm x1 Raiza

Spells-13 3x Book of Moon 2x Black Whirlwind 2x Dark Eruption 2x Allure of Darkness 1x Brain Control 1x Heavy Storm 1x Mystical Space Typhoon 1x Lightning Vortex

Traps-9 3x Icarus Attack 2x Bottomless Traphole 2x Threatening Roar 1x Torrential Tribute 1x Call of the Haunted