Forum:Rate my Zombie Deck

So I am trying my hardest to make an ultimate zombie deck following the ban rules. I could use anyones criticism to tell me whether or not my deck is good.

Monster Red Dragon Archfiend (Synchro) Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon Zombie Master x2 Gravitic Orb Gorz The Emissary Of Darkness Night Assailant D.D. Trainer Wall Of Illusion Malevolent Mech - Goku En Pyramid Turtle Mask Of Darkness Spirit Reaper Kiseitai Ryu Kokki Mystic Tomato Caius The Shadow Monarch Paladin Of The Cursed Dragon Newdoria The Lady In Wight x2 Patrician of Darkness Sillva, Warlord Of Dark World

Traps Trap Hole Bottomless Trap Hole Tutan Mask Dust Tornado Spacegate Rainbow Life Sakuretsu Armor Magic Cylinder

Spells Magical Stone Excavation Book of Life Demise of The Land Zombie World Card Of Safe Return Terraforming Ribbon Rebirth Mist Body Lighting Vortex Everliving Underworld Cannon