Forum:Canon Burn Deck Help

Hi, I am trying to create a Canon Burn deck, but so far it isn't really working with most players, here is the deck (NOTE: I DO NOT FOLLOW THE BANNED CARDS RULE, I JUST PLAY THIS GAME FOR FUN):

Normal Lv1-4 Monsters: 1x Aqua Madoor 1x Genetic Warped Warworlf 1x Battle Footballer 1x Archfiend Soldier 1x Mad Dog of Darkness 1x Giant Soldier of Stone 2x Oppressed People

Effect Lv1-4 Monsters:

1x Gyaku-Gire Panda 1x Blindly Loyal Goblin 1x Des Koala 1x Trap Master 1x Swarm of Scarabs 1x Fiber Jar 1x Black Ptera 1x Mysterious Puppeteer 1x Cannon Soldier 1x Throwstone Unit 1x Giant Orc 1x Kiseitai 1x Swarm of Locusts 1x Man Eater Bug

Effect Lv5+ Monsters:

1x Great Majuu Garzette

Magic Cards:

1x Final Flame 1x The Reliable Guardian 1x Goblin's Secret Remedy 1x Blue Potion 2x Heavy Storm 2x Mystical Space Typhoon 1x Lightning Voltex 2x Wave Motion Cannon 1x Dark Hole 1x Dian Keta the Cure Master 1x Timidity

Trap Cards:

1x Dark Mirror Force 2x Magic Cylinders 2x Negate Attack 1x Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell 1x Numinous Healer 1x Ultimate Offering 1x Dust Tornado 1x Secret Barrel

Basically I'm trying to create a burn deck, I don't like EVER attack with monsters, I only do that when I KNOW I can strike safely (ie, no monsters or magic traps on the opponent's side of the field). I have a lot of DEF2000 monsters to make a wall for myself, but my main combo is the Canon Soldier, black Ptera and Ultimate Offering combo. Now what i'm noticing is that it's really hard to get the combo, so I have a bunch of cards to help me out along the way, but I see now that I have WAY too many cards, and that sometimes I have hands of which I can't do anything with.

I would like to know, with all your knowledge of what what I should take out, and what I should put in to meet these following requirements i'm going for:

-Everytime the opponent attacks, there's always going to be something bad for him/her -Every card I get is useful in almost any turn (if possible)

That is why i have flip effect cards to help me out (though I do not really like the swarm monsters). Another thing is that i'm always afraid of when the opponent will use something to negate my magic traps (or destroy them), so I want to be well protected there as well (if that is even possible, or a deck that can finish a duel without all that even happening).

so, what should I take out and put in? and I dont' care for banned or limited cards, so feel free to splurt those as well, a few suggestions I got were like D-Hero Defender, Simochi's Infection(or something like that), Gift card, etc....

Thank you in advance!!