Forum:Newbie deck any help please

I have been a fan for some time now and I made this deck, please any sugestions or comments. Is it good.

Monsters - 24

Alien shocktrooper x 2 Alien Warrior Ancient Gear Knight Archfiend Soldier Chthonian emperor Dragon Dark Valkria Elemental Hero Neos Elemental Hero Neos Alius Fossil Tusker Gemini Lancer Gladiator Beast Andal Jutte Fighter Luster Dragon Necro Gardna Neo Space Pathfinder Neo-Spacian Air Hummingbird Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin Neo-Spacian Flare Scarab Neo-Spacian Grand Mole Psychic Commander Spear Dragon Winged Kuriboh Winged Kuriboh LV 10

Spells - 13

Axe of Despair Book of Moon x 2 Different Dimension Capsule Heavy Storm Hero Mask Lightning Vortex Mage Power Neo Space Swords of Revealing Light Transcendent Wings Twister United We Stand

Traps - 7

Begone, Knave! Draining Shield Mirror Force Rising Energy Solemn Judgement Torrential Tribute Wall of Revealing Light

Fusions & Synchros - 8

Elemental Hero Air Neos Elemental Hero Aqua Neos Elemental Hero Flare Neos Elemental Hero Grand Neos Colossal Fighter Gaia Knight, the Force of Earth Magical Andriod Psychic LIfetrancer

Please help and comment. Thanks!