Forum:First dark draft

i was thinking of making a new deck and this is what i came up with....plz be nice,its a first draft so i dont expect it to be anywhere close to perfect

LV.8 1x Dark armed dragon 2x dark horus 1x Rainbow Dark Dragon 2x the dark creator

LV.6 2x cauis

LV.4 2x Armageddon Knight 2x Doomsday Horror 2x phantom of choas 1x dark grepher 2x Infernal Dragon 2x promethues

LV.3 2x Dark Resonator

LV.2 2x kerbons 1x psz

24x monsters SPELL 2x allure of darkness 2x veil of darkness 2xBurial from a Different Dimension 1x soul realese 1x monster reborn 1x mst 1x heavy storm 1x brain control 1x card destrection 1x lightning vortex

13x spells TRAP 2x Escape from the Dark Dimension 1x Return from the Different Dimension 1x torrential tribute 1x mirror force 5x traps

all the norm syncros

advice plz