Forum:Please rate my decks and tell me what you think about it

this is my dark deck. it is a blend of strategy,beatdown and control. it is also based a bit on red eyes. i am a seto kaiba who uses red eyes.please do not ask me to put red eyes darkness metal dragon as it is rare.

(awesome spell card), (defence),
 * red eyes darkness dragon
 * well i can drop 11 dragons (including the other 2 red eyes and the other 2 hourus) on to the graveyard and with additional power fron mystic plasma zone i can raise the atk into 6200,
 * red eyes black dragon,
 * red eyes b chick,
 * dark armed dragon a must have for dark decks,
 * horus lv8,lv6,lv4 (for the spells),
 * jinzo (for the traps),
 * armed dragon lv5,
 * mobius the frost monarch,
 * twin headed behemoth,
 * element dragon,
 * masked dragon,
 * hunter dragon,
 * sprit ryu,
 * crawling dragon,
 * ryu ran,
 * gravekeeper's spy,
 * gravekeeper's spear soldier,
 * des koala,
 * big eye,
 * mask of darkness,
 * magical marionette,
 * bowganian,
 * rafflesia seduction,
 * wave motion cannon
 * monster reborn,
 * fissure,
 * mystic plasma zone,
 * gravekeeper's servant,
 * 7 completed,
 * the dark door
 * 2 level ups,
 * curse of anubis,
 * solemn wishes,
 * gift of the mystical elf,
 * trap hole,
 * adhesion trap hole,
 * mind haxorz,


 * and this is my other deck
 * dark magician
 * neo aqua madoor
 * fusiller dragon the duel mode beast
 * enraged muka muka
 * the rock sprit
 * labyrinth wall
 * heavy mech support platform
 * gazelle the king of mythical beasts
 * giant soldier of stone
 * amazon archer
 * amazoness paladin
 * amazoness fighter
 * dark mimic lv3
 * tactical espionage expert
 * the hunter with 7 waepons
 * silver fang
 * 2 ninja grandmaster sasuke
 * kojikocy
 * oppressed people
 * swordstalker
 * decayed commander
 * zombie tiger
 * gale lizard
 * the unhappy maiden
 * roulette barrel
 * cocoon of evolution
 * ultimate baseball kid
 * 2 horus servant
 * blast juggler
 * howling insect
 * dark factory of mass production
 * kaiser colosseum
 * red medicine
 * amazoness spellcaster
 * physical double
 * cursed seal of the forbidden spell
 * dora of fate
 * xing zhen hu


 * please also help me to make two sidedecks with the following cards
 * 2 polymerization
 * my body as a shield
 * armor break
 * formation union
 * heavy slump
 * 2 mega ton magical cannon
 * miracle dig
 * lighten the load
 * big wave small wave
 * poison fangs
 * thunder dragon
 * blasting the ruins
 * royal magic library
 * cannonball spear shellfish
 * umi
 * null and void
 * tremendous fire
 * convulsion of nature
 * mystic swordsman lv2
 * eagle eye
 * the trojan horse
 * element soldier
 * spherous lady
 * malice the doll of demise