Forum:Please fix and rate my new deck

My monsters Yubel Yubel Terror Incarnate Yubel The Ultimata Nightmare Mystic Tomato x3 Peten The Dark Clown x3 Grave Squermer Doom shaman Dark nephthys Dark Horus Phantom Of Chaos Newdoria Caius The Shadow Monarch Dark Resonator Pitch-Black Warwolf Dark Valkyria Dark Crusader x2 Pyramid Turtle Snipe Hunter Spirit Reaper

Spells Card Trader Swords Of Reveling Light Brain Control Fires Of Doomsday Mystical Space Typhoon Monsrer Reborn Heavy Storm Malevolent Nuzzler Offrings To The Doomed Lighting Vortex

Traps

Torrential Tribute Magic Cylinder Zoma The Spirit Magic Jammer Ultimate Offering

Extra Deck Red Demon Archifienfd Chain Dragon Black Rose Dragon