Forum:D.D. Deck! R/F please

Hey guys i just made a D.D deck and i was wondering if you guys could R/F it :] Im using my Yugioh 2009 game, with no ban list cheat, so any card would work.

Monsters - 23 Blackwing- Gale the Whirlwind x1 Caius the shadow monarch x3 cyber valley x3 D.D. Assailant 2x D.D. scout plane x3 D.D. survivor x3 D.D.M different dimension master x1 Raiza the storm monarch x3 Soldier of Mist Valley x2 Summoner monk x2

Spells - 10 Allure of Darkness x2 Book of moon x2 brain control x1 dimensional fissure x2 giant trunade x1 mind control x1 mystical space typhoon x1

Traps - 7 bottemless trap hole x2 marco cosmos x2 mirror force x2 torrential tribute x1

Synchros black rose dragon x2 blackwing armor master brionac dragon of the ice barrier x2 dark strike fighter goyo guardian red dragon archfiend stardust dragon thought ruler archfiend

Thanks guys for all ur help!