Forum:Defencive Burn deck

hey guy's ^^ about 3 months ago i have started playing yugioh again and unfortunately i have kinda trouble putting a nice deck together.I have made a little deck and i was wondering what you think about it and if you could give me some tips perhaps ^^

Deck: Monsters:(26) 2x Spirit Reaper 2x Worm Xex 2x Worm Yagan 1x Exiled Force 1x D.D Warior Lady 1x Breaker The Magical Warrior 1x Mist Archfiend 1x Sangan 1x Morphing jar #2 2x Giant Rat 2x Labyrinth Wall 2x Pyramid Turtle 2x Ryu Kokki 3x Reflect Bounder 1x Princess Of Tsurugi 2x Chaos Sorcerer

Total Monster Atribute's: 1x Wind 8x Earth 9x Dark 8x Light

Traps:(11) 2x Ominous Fortunetelling 1x Call Of The Haunted 1x Gravity Bind 1x Imperial Custom 1x Compulsory Evacuation Device 1x Seven Tools Of The Bandit 1x Negate Attack 1x Magic Cylinder 1x Mirror Force 1x Torrential Tribute

Magic And Spell's:(14)

Magic: 2x Ground Collapse

Spell: 3x Reload 2x Mystical Space Typhoon 1x Card Trader 1x Wave Motion Cannon 1x Level Limit Area B 1x Swords Of Revealing Light 1x Book Of Life 1x Monster Reborn 1x Mage Power

Total Cards: 51...

Yeah i know some of you are now like ... O,O are you nuts?? But let me explain the way i wanna play it ^^:

This deck is build for slowely life sucking with an "Ultimate Defence",Strong Special Summon Monsters and Lockdowns^^.

2x Ominous Fortunetelling(For the slowely life sucking,u can also play this with the spirit reapers and the Labyrinth Wall's,also u can play this with Gravity Bind,Level Limit Area B,Wave Motion Canon,Swords Of Revealing Light and Imperial custom to make sure that your life sucking cards stay as long as possible on the field.

2x Ground Collapse (these are nice cards for almost field lockdowns.Its hard to play with one monster.I can use this card in combination with spirit reaper,Gravity Bind,Labyrinth Wall's

2x MST(for safety) 1x Torrential Tribute(for safety) 1x Mirror Force(for safety) 1x Magic Cylinder(Reduce the opponent's lifepoints some more) 1x Negate Attack (for safety) 1x Seven Tools Of the Bandit (for safety) 1x Compulsory Evacuation Device (for safety)

2x Worm Xex and 2x Worm Yagan (If i summon Worm Xex I can special summon Worm Yagan in Face down defence position and when yagan is flipped face up i can send one face up monster from my opponent back to their hand,Also Worm Xex Cannot be destroyed by battle as long as i have one face up yagan on the field)

2x Giant Rat (Giant rat gives me the oppertunity to summon:Pyramid turtle(its effect can grant me access to Ryu Kokki,I can also play Book of Life to Return Ryu Kokki,Pyramid Turtle or Spirit Reaper),Labyrint Wall(for a nice defence),Exiled Force and DD Warior Lady (To screw up some of his cards)

1x Sangan ( Grants me Access to Pyramid Turtle,Labyrint Wall,Spirit Reaper,Morphing Jar #2 ( To screw up as many monsters that he has on the field if i cant do anything), and Princess Of Tsurugi (for Life Points Damage).

3x Reflect Bounder ( Damage Opponents Lifepoints) 1x Mist Archfiend (strong monster 5 star that can be sommoned directly from the hand) 1x Breaker The Magical Warrior (Destroy trap/Spell card on the field)

2x Chaos Sorcerer (screw up one card on the field and with that many light and dark monsters in my deck this wont be too difficult to summon)

3x Reload and 1x Card Trader ( Too get me the right cards in hands as soon as possible) 1x Monster Reborn, 1x Call Of the Haunted , Mage Power (These are always very usefull cards that might come handy.) I was planning to put 1x Return of a Difrent Dimension in it but im kinda hesitating...

Anywayz Let me know what you think of it and what i could possibily do to make this deck better and sorry for my misspelled words and sentances^^.

Greetz, Asukaninja.