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Monsters Elemental Mistress Doriado Morphing jar Sangan Spirit Reaper Marshmallon Gilasaurus Rose Warrior of Revenge x2 Tune Warrior x2 Cyber Dragon Raiza the Storm Moarch Red Ogre Snipe Hunter (plan on removing)Ojama Black/Green/Yellow x2 Each

Spell Card Destruction Lightning Vortex Advanced Ritual Art Monster Reborn (Might Remove)Magical Malletx2 (Plan on removing)Ojamagicx2

Trap Ceasefire The Spell Absorbing Life Astral Barrier x3 Spirit Barrier x3 Fuh-Rin-Za-Kan x2 (Plan on removing)Trap of Darkness

I'm definitly trying to be original, one big problem I see is consistency, on the Doriado, but I haven't had problems, with that. I have found the Ojama part of the deck useless, absolutely,I pretty much leave just tribute it, and use it as defence fodder. Another thing I see I can add is my body as a shield, but I rather here from you all first, and if you see a pointless part of my deck, please indicate it, and I'll try to point out its use.

P.S. Thanks in advance.