Forum:Please rate my deck with constructive critisizm

I would Like to ask for some constructive critisism on my deck plan and some thoughts on how well it would work, as well as ways I could improve it both in traditional and advanced format. I'd also like to ask about good deck set ups for FTK decks, I do have Exodia and can access most cards.

Mausoleum Of The Immortals Deck


 * Advanced format

monster Montage Dragon x3 Gandora the Dragon Of Destruction x3 Malefic Cyber End Dragon x3 Earthbound Immortal Chacu Challhua x3 Earthbound Immortal Aslla Piscu x3 Earthbound Immortal Uru x3 Fusilier dragon, the dual mode beast x3 Sangan

Extra Cyber End Dragon x3

Spell Mausoleum of the Emperor x3 Terraforming x3 Magical Mallet x3 Giant Trunade Mystical Space Typhoon x2/Gold Sarcophgus x2 (not sure which would be better?) Dark Hole Monster Reborn

Trap Solemn Judgement Dark Bribe x3

Mausoleum Of The Immortals Deck


 * Traditional format

monster Montage Dragon x3 Gandora the Dragon Of Destruction x3 Malefic Cyber End Dragon x3 Earthbound Immortal Chacu Challhua x3 Earthbound Immortal Aslla Piscu x3 Earthbound Immortal Uru x3 Fusilier dragon, the dual mode beast x3 Witch of the Black Forest

Extra Cyber End Dragon x3

Spell Mausoleum of the Emperor x3 Terraforming x3 Magical Mallet x3 Giant Trunade Haepies feather duster Rageki Dark Hole Monster Reborn

Trap Solemn Judgement Dark Bribe x3

For this deck I would be planing to be using montage with any 3 high level monsters for a OTK, possibly combined with Dark Hole, Rageki for traditional or Gandora to clean the field. Can use all high level monsters for offence and defence with mausoleum also serving as field card. Fusilier dragon can be used as a high level monster for montage, summoned with mausleum or as a low level stall monster. A fair amount of cards for countering traps and magic with counter traps included for magic/traps or maybe even a monster with SJ.