Forum:First Deck Attempt (E Hero) - Suggestions and Advice welcomed!

Ok so I've attempted my first deck, as the headline would hint toward :P I've listed it on my talk page but I'll copy it to here. I think it looks pretty good, but obviously I have yet to try it out in a game with friends. When I do I'll let you know how it goes :)

So yeah.. Thoughts? Tips?

Muchas gracias to any help =)