Forum:Chain town deck idea

hi guys and gals. im jetronix. first, thanks for taking a look at my first forum i created. i thought of an idea of combining iron chains to synchro summon black rose dragon, clear the field with his effect whilst destroying gear town, and special summon a 3000 atk gadgiltron dragon to attack directly. comments, ideas, and criticizism is greatly appreciated. (btw, its chain town, not china town) hear we go:

Monster count 16

3 ancient gear gadjiltron dragon

3 chain repairman

3 chain coils

1 marauding captain

1 chain snake/comrade swordsman of landstar (which one should i use?)

1 breaker

2 mobius

1 kuraz

1 ancient gear engineer

Spells (17) 3 gear town

2 demise of the land

2 terraforming

Monster reborn

Lightning vortex

2 card of safe return

Mystical space typhoon

Brain control

2 rota

2 foolish burial

heavy storm

traps (6) Torrential tribute

Mirror force

Bottomless

dust tornado

Malevolent catastrophe

Widespread ruin

Extra deck: 2 black rose dragon 2 iron chain dragon Jetronix 12:21, 16 December 2008 (UTC) thanks alot guys!

ok nice thought i would suggest -1 dragon and add 2 chain snakes mill down your opponents deck try +2 on the engineers and 3-mechanical chasers. also slide in an extra (under the radar move) that ur opponent won't suspect