Forum:First Deck Attempt: Macro Monarch - rate and edit

I'm relatively new to Yu-Gi-Oh and decided to go for a Macro Monarch Deck. Here's what I have so far: (Also first time posting here, sorry if it looks terrible or there's something wrong with the post.)

MONSTERS 3 D.D. Survivors 2 D.D. Scout Planes 1 D.D. Assailant 1 Exiled Force 1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole 1 Spell Striker 1 Marshmallon 1 Breaker the Magical Warrior 1 Spirit Reaper 2 Zaborg the Thunder Monarchs 3 Caius the Shadow Monarchs 1 Mobius the Frost Monarch 1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

TRAPS 1 Mirror Force 2 Macro Cosmos 1 Sakuretsu Armor 2 Bottomless Trap Holes 1 Divine Wrath 1 Nightmare Wheel 1 Nordic Relic Laevateinn

SPELLS 3 Dimensional Fissures 1 Lightning Vortex 1 Mystical Space Typhoon 1 Enemy Controller 1 D.D.R. 1 Swords of Revealing Light 1 Soul Exchange 1 Reinforcements of the Army