Forum talk:Deck Guide/Fairy


 * Impressive guide, Tantara, but I find it wanting. Let me explain.
 * You don't mention the criteria by which cards are chosen to be added in a deck.
 * You don't analyze the function, pros and cons of the cards sufficiently. Even the slightest advantage and disadvantage should be covered.
 * You don't analyze some cards at all (e.g. Counter Traps).
 * Too many examples! You don't need so many! Better to divide and write different sections for each different variation, than cram them all up in one section. It looks weird.
 * Insufficient analysis of the deck mechanics. Now I know how the Honest Athena OTK works, but new builders that will turn to the guides for advice won't. Better to describe the deck and how it works than not.
 * Not many links (yeah I know that's nitpicking, but new builders won't know what a Dead Draw or a Staple are, so you'd better link them.

Those are the main issues I can spot. You, of course, can disagree with me, but do so after looking at my effort. I have written a bit more than you for one variation, and you covered nearly all of them in less space! Now that doesn't seem logical, does it? I'm not suggesting redundancy, but a bit more of an in-depth analysis. That's what I suggest and what I'll do as well. I know it is lengthy, tedious and outragingly hard, but as you said, this is a MASSIVE undertaking. --Darth Covah (Talk | Contribs) 12:09, 27 August 2009 (UTC)