Forum:Need Help With A Dark Magician deck please

I really need desperate help on my dark magician beatdown/lockdown deck... i feel it isnt very good and i would appreciate any help or pointers that someone may be able to give me... thank you my deck is as follows: 1x Dark Magician Girl 2x Dark Magician 1x Tyrant dragon 2x gemini elf 3x skilled dark magician 2x vorse raider 2x berserk gorilla 1x jinzo 1x blade knight 1x goblin elite attack force 1x man eater bug SPELL CARDS 1x dark magic curtain 1x dark magic attack 1x mage power 1x heavy storm 1x card destruction 1x reload 1x shield crush 1x cost down 1x diffusion wave motion 1x mystical space typhoon 1x brain control 1x lightning vortex TRAP CARDS 1x blast held by a tribute 1x shadow spell 1x final attack orders 1x torrential tribute 1x magic drain 1x magic jammer 1x magic cylinder 1x royal command 1x trap hole 1x call of the haunted 1x sakuretsu armor 1x judgement of anubis 1x rope of life 1x ceasefire

can anyone help with this? i feel i have some necessary cards and some not so necessary cards any opinions would be much appreciated