Forum:Give me some comments of my blackwings deck

I hv a blackwings deck. Pls help to rate it and gif me some comments about it:

Monster (23) 1 Dark Creator 1 Blackwing - elphin the raven 1 Dark Armed Dragon 3 Blackwing - Sirroco the Dawn 1 Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind 3 Blackwing - Blizzard from the Far North 1 Blackwing - Breeze the Zephyr 2 Blackwing - Mistral the Silver Shield 3 Blackwing - Bora the Spear 3 Blackwing - Shura the Blue Flame 3 Blackwing - Kalut the Moon Shadow

Magic (10) 2 Book of Moon 2 Black Whirlwind 2 Dark Eruption 2 Lightning Vortex 1 Brain Wash 1 Heavy Storm

Trap(10) 3 Icarus Attack 2 Delta Crow Anti Reverse 1 Call of Haunted 1 Torential Tribute 1 Mirror Force 1 Solemn Judgement 1 Bottomless Trap Hole