Forum:Would this be a good deck idea?

I'm considering making a new burn/lockdown deck, but I need help. The basic ideas are these: .  Using combinations of Dupe Frogs and defense-mode Morphtronic Magnens, I keep my opponent from attacking me. .  I use cards such as Jinzo and Spell Canceler to keep my opponent from activating potentially-crippling cards. .  In the event that my Frogs or Magnens do end up in the graveyard, I can use Salvage and Recycling Batteries to get them back in my hand. .  While my opponent is in lockdown, I can quickly chip away at his life points with Raging Flame Sprite and Mucus Yolk. That's my basic idea. What should I do to make it better?