Forum:YGO's back at my school, check my Chaos?

Hey I recently got a bunch of cards from my friend and I've been tweaking it to make it more competitive *this is just traditional format, but he lacked a bunch of cards* I'm looking for a Black Luster Soldier Envoy, so that's in the works (though I don't think I want it because it feels like it takes the fun out of this game sort of...)

I also feel like I should put in Sinister Serpent somewhere but I don't know where to place it cause I want to keep it at 40. *I also lack the sleeves for it*

Monster Count: 17 Chaos Sorcerer x 1 Airknight Parsath x 1

Earth Berserk Gorilla x 1 Exiled Force x 1 D.D. Assailant x 1 (removed Tsukiyomi)

Light Ninja Master Sasuke x 1 D.D. Warrior Lady x 1

Dark Don Zaloog x 2 Sangan x 1 Spirit Reaper x 2 Breaker the Magical Warrior x 1 Cyber Jar x 1 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer x 1 Kuriboh x 1 Witch of the Black Forest x 1 (removed All Defense Shogun)

Magic Count: 15 Dark Hole x 1 Mystical Space Typhoon x 2 Brain Control x 1 Monster Reincarnation x 1 Swords of Revealing Light x 1 Snatch Steal x 1 Reinforcement of the Arm x 1 Lightning Vortex x 1 Premature Burial x 1 Scapegoat x 1 Nobleman of Crossout x 1 Creature Swap x 1 Heavy Storm x 1 Confiscation x 1

Trap Count : 8 Torrential Tribute x 1 Bottomless Trap Hole x 2 Call of the Haunted x 1 Sakuretsu Armor x 1 Dust Tornado x 1 Magic Cylinder x 1 Return from the Different Dimension x 1 (I don't know if I want to keep this, but I have no idea what to replace it with)