Forum:Rate my twilight deck

Please! I really need help with this deck and I want to know what you guys think.

Main Deck (45 cards): Monsters (32): Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning 1x Chaos Sorcerer 1x Lightpulsar Dragon 2x Darkfalre Dragon 2x Judgment Dragon 3x Herald of Creation 1x Honest 1x Eclipse Wyvern 2x Gorz, The Emissary of Darkness 1x Necro Gardna 3x Sangan 1x Tour guide 2x d.d. crow 2x celsetia, lightsworn angel 1x lumina, lightsworn summonner 2x ryko, lightsworn hunter 2x lyla, lightsworn sorcerer 2x jain, lightsworn paladin 1x ehren, lightsworn monk 1x garoth, lightsworn warrior 1x

spells (11): solar recharge 3x dark hole 1x allure of darkness 1x heavy storm 1x monster reborn 1x charge of the light brigade 1x burial from a different dimension 1x monster reincarnation 1x magical stone excavation 1x

traps (02): royal decree 1x return from the differentt dimension 1x

Extra deck (03): Leviair, the sea dragon 3x

side deck (07): effect veiler 3x jinzo 2x card trooper 2x

Please: rate, tell me your opinion and tell me what do you think I should take out or put. And sorry if I misspelled anything.