Forum:Zombie deck - need tips

thanks for looking at my thread or whatever it is :)i know that i have probably made a mistake of some sort whilst writing this, as this is my first time on a forum so i apologise if i didn't put something where it should be ore whatever, i basicly made a deck originally based off of the zombie world starter deck, but it gradually changed quite a bit, i need some opinions on what i should put in, take out and stuff like that, and maybe tell me of a few combos i may not have noticed, thanks in advance :)

this is my deck so far, all of the more expensive cards i got from trading, luckily finding people with the cards i needed,

Monsters - x20

Il Blud x1 (looking to get another one, seems like a good idea.)

mezuki x1

Dark Armed Dragon x1 (only just added that to my deck, seems to work ok)

Grave squirmer x1 (i can repeatedly drag him back from the grave to destroy more cards, and do serios damage with Creature Swap.)

Red Eyes Zombie Dragon x2

Ryu Kokki x2

Pyramid Turtle x3

Zombie master x3

Goblin Zombie x2

Spirit Reaper x1

Exiled Force x2 (clears the way with effect, can be brought back using zombie world and Il Blud)

Giant Rat x1 (searches out turtles)

Spells - 17

Allure Of Darkness x1

Smashing ground x1

Heavy Storm x1

MST x2

Lightning Vortex x1

Zombie World x1

Burial From A Different Dimension x1

Monster Reborn x1

Field Barrier x1

Book Of Life x3

Card Of Destruction x1

Graceful Charity x1

Creature Swap x1

Foolish Burial x1

Traps - 5

Bottomless Trap Hole x2

Torrential Tribute x1

Sakuretsu Armor x2