Forum:Exiled zombie force - Please comment and give suggestions!

Sorry as I do not know how to make the deck links but here is the deck, Exiled Zombie force- Monsters 20- 1x Gorz the emissary of darkness, 1x Red eyes zombie dragon, 1x Il blud, 2x Cauis the shadow monarch, 3x Zombie master, 2x giant rat, 2x pyramid turtle, 1x exiled force, 1x sangan, 1x neo spacian - grand mole, 1x morphing jar, 1x spirit reaper, 1x breaker the magical warrior, 1x snipe hunter.

Spells 10- 2x Zombie world, 1x Mystical space typhoon, 1x heavy storm, 2x book of life, 1x creature swap, 1x lightning vortex, 1x brain control, 1x foolish burial

Traps 10- 1x trap dustshoot, 1x call of the haunted, 1x pheonix wind wing blast, 1x sakuretsu armor, 2x bottomless trap hole, 1x torrential tribute, 3x reckless greed.

Other cards I think would go quite well in the deck that I own or are going to buy soon are kycoo the ghost destroyer, threatning roar, armageddon knight and another exiled force

The main focus of the deck is to keep field control with most monsters such as grand mole, gorz, snipe hunter etc. Then to get 1 exiled force into the graveyard and have zombie world in play, I can then try to swarm constantly and constantly revive exiled force to clear there field, I know cauis is unplayable when i have zombie world on the field but then I would just use him to discard for effects such as pheonix wing blast, lightning vortex, snipe hunter, zombie master etc. Plus when he is the grave he is a 2400 beatstick and if zombie world is in play i can still revive him easily. The rats are there to such out exiled force and mole, sangan is just there for getting anything i need to my hand as there is quite a few targets. And obveusly pyramid turtle for getting out il blud, red eyes or zombie master. For draw power I am sure there is enough (even too much) as i have sangan, 3 reckless and morphing jar.

Please comment and give any suggestions but just to say i am on quite a low budget!