Forum:Rate my Deck, Advice Welcome

So I recently got back into Yugioh and I found a bunch of cards and decided to see if I could create a deck with my collection. If you guys could cut it down in size or strengthen it up, that'd be great.

Total Cards = 57

So the main goal of this deck is to starve off receiving damage, and instead build up a series of fodder warriors in order to summon the big guys. And if the opponent were to try something funny, my support cards would punish them for even thinking of doing something.

What do you guys think?