Forum:Spellcaster Lockdown Deck Rate Please!?

So I'm trying to build a tournament winning Secret Village of Spellcasters lockdown deck. Could anyone rate the one I have so far???

Secret Village of Spellcaster Lockdown Deck

Total: 41

Monsters: 23

1 Dark Creator 2 Dark Magician 2 Dark Magician Girl 2 Breaker the Magical Warrior 3 Magicians Valk. 2 Defender the Magical Knight 3 Skilled Dark Magician 2 Copycat 3 Old Vindictave Magician 3 Aprrentice Magician

Spells:12

2 Smashing Ground 1 Fissure 2 Magical Dimension 2 Shield Crush 1 Terraforming 3 Secret Village of Spellcasters 1 Lightining Vortex

Traps: 6

1 Torrental Tribute 2 Royal Decree 2 Sakeretsu Armor 1 Call of The Haunted