Forum:Help me out with my Relinquished deck, anyone?

I'm confident that my relinquished deck is above par, and is rather good, but it's just not as good as it could be. Specifically speaking, I've heard about relinquished decks that can end a game in 3 turns. Which is cool. And my deck isn't at that point yet...

This is my current deck:

-RITUAL 3 relinquished

-MAGIC 1 ring of magnetism 2 graceful charity 1 opti-camouflage armor 1 Mystical space typhoon 3 Black illusion ritual 2 the dark door 1 advanced ritual art 1 swords of revealing light 1 monster reborn 1 giant trunade 1 heavy storm 1 premature burial 1 scapegoat 1 malice dispersion

-TRAP 2 magic jammer 3 needle wall 1 gravity bind 1 graceful revival

-MONSTER 3 sonic bird 3 witch of the black forest 2 armed ninja 1 magician of faith 2 patrician of darkness 3 sangan 1 manju of ten thousand hands 1 lava golem 2 Djinn releaser of rituals

'''Any tips? Card suggestions? thanks.'''