Forum:Rate my main deck

This is my main deck that I have been making since I got back into yugioh a few years back so please could you help me make it better and I would like to try to keep the cards my Girlfriend gave me back then

here is the deck:

Monsters:22 1 Dark Magician Girl* 1 Gravekeeper's Guard 1 Genex Controller 1 Night Assailant 1 Gemini Elf 1 Penguin Solider 1 Fabled Raven 1 Neo-Spacian Dark Panther 1 Drill Synchron 1 Dark Magician* 1 Battle Fader 1 Defender, The Magical Knight 2 Breaker The Magical Warrior 1 Effect Veiler 1 Winged Kuriboh 1 Junk Synchron 1 Magician's Valkyria 1 King of The Swamp 1 Alchemist of Black Spells 1 Delg the Dark Monarch 1 Buster Blader

Spells:7 1 Monster Reborn 1 Swords of Revealing Light 1 Lightning Vortex 1 Pot of Avarice 1 Bait Doll 1 Polymerization 1 Miracle Synchro Fusion

Traps:11 1 Liberty at Last! 1 Draining Shield 1 Dark Bribe 1 Magic cylinder 1 Negate Attack 1 Changing Destiny 1 Bottomless Trap Hole 1 Dimensional Prison 1 Starlight Road 1 Divine Wrath 1 Scrap-Iron Scarecrow


 * =the cards she gave me

Extra deck: 2 Dark Paladin 2 Supreme Arcanite Magician 1 Iron Chain Dragon 1 Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier 1 Drill Warrior 1 Tempest Magician 2 Arcanite Magician 1 Stardust Dragon 1 Black Winged Dragon 1 LocoMotion R-Genex